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i'm outta here
Contributed by
azzouz
on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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time,the famous cure
love,pain for sure
dreams,my way out
hope,when i'm in doubt
joy,my only wish
human, so selfish
life,a place to see
hard feelings,no mercy
money,all they care about
passion,time to forget about
promess,no doubt!
loyalety,skip it.
success,that's my goal
a lovely wife,what for?!?!?
to love or to hold?
for pain or forward!?
loneliness,yeah that's it
a solution,can u believe it!
regret,nahhhhhhhhh
decision,taken.......
fool,maybe i am
tired,no need to ask!
get away,best solution
quick help,evolution....
Copyright ©
azzouz
... [
2002-11-25 20:30:00]
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Re: i'm outta here
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 01:53:22 PM AEST
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| this is very good, i liked the way u kept the rhyme going all the way through, very nicely done |
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