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In that Solitude
Contributed by
Nardo
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:49:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In that solitude there is only You. Why? Because, I can not allow you to take me back there, there to that place of constant winter. That place where the plants and trees are covered in sheets of frozen blood. That place where the Sun does not exist and the Moon is the ruler of Night Terrors not of Dreams and the Fantastic. Birds do not sing sweet songs only horrific screams, a Holocaust of noise. I have watched you through the window of my mind. I have watched you die on a daily basis always taking your own life, never for the sake of others, but rather, because you see no way out and in order to survive you feel the need to drag others in. You are no Phoenix, the flame of your passion burnt out long ago and there are no ashes to sustain another life for you. The weight of snow holds you down and the layers upon layers you say you need to keep you warm are nothing more than bricks and cement to keep you well contained in your self-created Hell. No, I will not allow this anymore. Your blood is yours, I will not bleed for you. My breath is mine, You can not breathe for me.
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Nardo
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Re: In that Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:32:27 PM AEST (User
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wowww1,wonderfully written! the person you're writing about must have really put alot on you. great poem. |
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Re: In that Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST (User
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i really like this....excellent job.....fantastic poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: In that Solitude
(User Rating: 1 ) by Red_October on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:11:50 AM AEST (User
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Nardo! This is excellent work. I am printing this to hang on my bulletin board for a while. Really amazing write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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