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Cruel Demise (edited)
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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With this gun I shoot you dead
For you put pain within my head
Your limp, cold body hit the ground
Crimson blood spilt all around
I cannot say I have regret
Death you still soon would have met
But I made sure that it was I
Who brought amongst your cruel demise
Its all youre fault this came to be
For everything youve done to me
They years of neglect I received from you
Caused thoughts of hatred to break through
I finally expressed how I truly had felt
But with it you had never dealt
A cry for attention is what you had said
A passing mood found in my head
Never a second though that maybe its real
That maybe depression I truly to feel
And that deep within my twisted mind
Happiness I can longer find
And that no longer can I clearly think
Into an empty void I sink
With youre life you greatly pay
So why does my torment still remain
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-12-06 15:09:45]
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Re: Cruel Demise (edited)
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by BlindSuicide on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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Oh wow.. this poem is very very well expressed i felt ur anger for a minute there.Great write.Keep it up.
Much love
~Alucia~ |
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