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Lost In Time
Contributed by
sunshiny
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:42:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I went to our meeting place today
Waiting for you, I shed a tear
I hardly know you...
Yet I have known you forever
We could have been friends, you and I
Waiting for what could have been
I ache for your voice, your reasoning
I just want to smile again
Loneliness sets in
The clock ticks...
Physically, emotionally drained
I wait for one word from your lips
I long for any connection to you
I hear the song...
over and over
Don't you understand?
Please talk to me
You're almost gone
Another day done...
I sit alone
Copyright ©
sunshiny
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2004-12-06 17:42:54]
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Re: Lost In Time
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by Chanti on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:22:49 PM AEST
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somber, but beautiful... i liked it a lot
-Chanti |
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Re: Lost In Time
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:53:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful, well done |
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Re: Lost In Time
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:51:01 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, hugs n' love nessa
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