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Till You're Gone
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:09:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Till You're Gone
It's not ok to be Something unreal to me Ignoring Reality Mistaken Everything.
It doesn't matter what you say Nothing will be the same And I won't be ok Till You're Gone
Gone. From my heart and from my mind I don't want you here I can't take it and I feel I'm gonna faint.
Gone. From the bottom of my soul I can't let you stay Cuz my heart can't take another break today.
My emotions run over I am numb and cold I feel like I can't breathe The lessons of my troubled life unfold.
As your standing there And I say goodbye The sun comes out And I can finally see the light.
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xfrozenwindx
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2004-12-06 18:09:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Till You're Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:51:46 PM AEST (User
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your style reminds me of my style mixing the past and the present. excellent write. written well. |
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