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Why
Contributed by
Elf
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 07:16:43 PM in AEST
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I sit here each day
Always wondering why.
Why things must be
the way that they are.
I wonder why I'm treated
the ways that I am.
Why I'm named
the things that I am.
I wonder why I put up
with all of the things I do.
Why I don't just
go off on everyone.
Then I remember why,
why I put up and
don't just explode.
I love him too much.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-12-06 19:16:43]
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Re: Why
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by Chanti on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:15:57 PM AEST
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aw great write... i hope he is worth it.
-Chanti |
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Re: Why
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:33:21 PM AEST
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| I wonder about things too, good write. |
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Re: Why
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:53:19 PM AEST
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| great write. but if he really cared he wouldnt leave from just an explosion. |
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Re: Why
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:45:30 PM AEST
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| Nice write. I think you should stand up for yourself. No one should have to be treated like a doormat. |
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