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What We Were
Contributed by
waos
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 07:38:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Heavy on my mind
like snow upon the ground.
Heavy on my heart
like loneliness in a crowd.
It's heavy.
Close my eyes and dream,
dream of yesterdays.
Close my eyes and pretend,
pretend you're here next to me.
Just a dream.
Can you remember how to dream?
Regret what's been ruined,
long for it's return.
Regret what's faded,
how did we watch it burn?
Faded.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-12-06 19:38:54]
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Re: What We Were
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:13:30 PM AEST
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painful, but lovely write... i can relate to the feeling.
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Re: What We Were
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:29:35 PM AEST
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Wonderful Kara and I find it hard to believe
that you didn't put much into it. It was great...
could've been a bit longer perhaps, but other
than that it was awesome maybe just add
like two more lines between the last question
and faded. I loved this though it was very good
and I'm glad u finally posted something again.
Bobo (Joel) |
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