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your life is a lie...
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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every worthless word
that you said that day
in my memory, they constantly replay
how could you leave me here
where the silence burns my ears
in this abandoned place
i am met with all my fears
how can you call yourself a father
the best i can give you is a friend
money wont buy forgiveness
or a new world of pretend
im sorry that i trusted you
and thought that you knew right from wrong
you cheated everyone you said you loved
youve been lying all along.
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Chanti
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2004-12-06 20:58:24]
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Re: your life is a lie...
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write. So heartfelt and strong.
"money wont buy forgiveness
or a new world of pretend"
^Great lines. I can relate to this poem a lot, especially in regards to those lines. |
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Re: your life is a lie...
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:37:09 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. reminds me of people trying to make up for lost time also. |
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