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Tales Of A Flow
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 12:20:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I'm so lost
deep
in a flow
and It's so
beautiful.....
I love the scenery
the grass is green
the sky is blue
and rainbows of love
E X P L O D E,
A voice moans to me
and in the distance
I know that something
delightful
is coming,
there are no words
that can describe
the feelings of this flow.
OOOOh
At this moment
I stagger
as a sweet thought
drops
Into my mind,
the vision of a place
of passion
causes a ragin desire.
I can't believe
It's so hard to breathe
when everything
Is oh so
beautiful,
though I try
I just can't describe
the emotion of this flow.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-12-07 00:20:45]
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Re: Tales Of A Flow
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 12:35:26 AM AEST
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Yeah baby,
I feelinn ya all the way from my toes 2 my head. smilen jus 4 u.
luv, huggs, smiles, kissin,
emy |
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Re: Tales Of A Flow
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:41:09 AM AEST
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Would be awesome to feel something that sound so awesome...alas i never will allow that to happen.
Awesome write...enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: Tales Of A Flow
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:59:51 AM AEST
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very well expressed, written beautifully, great poem,
pixie xx |
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