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My World
Contributed by
maryetta
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:20:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my world is dark and gloomy from yours
you live in a fairly happy world with no effort
i struggle to keep up with you and i struggle
how i wish i could always live in your world
i wish we could combine your world and my world
you live with white and gray i live with black and gray
you dont understand what its like to see only black
i cant tell you i cant show you its only there
but the pain and agony is my mind is so intense
i wish we could combine your world and my world
on my good days im in gray that is an achievement
on your good days your in the white and you stay
if you could understand my world you could see
why i cant live like you or reason like you
i wish we could combine your world and my world
our worlds are so far apart they dont see eye to eye
we arent here cause we want to be our brains dictate
its called a chemical imbalance we live on pills
just so we can have some semblance of your world
i wish we could combine your world and my world
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maryetta
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2004-12-07 01:20:08]
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Re: My World
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:27:34 AM AEST
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Awesome masterpeice my friend.
thank God for the chemicals we get in pills these days.
Great write.
It will help many realize there is help with any Dr. anywhere.
Good work.
I know the feelings well but thanks to my meds I'm happier than I can remember jus living alone.
Importent message.
Luv, huggs, meds,
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Re: My World
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:37:09 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, showing much strength in posting something many know nothing about......I live on meds but for reason different to yours....pills that put me into a world such as yours wish I didnt have to take them.
Such a beautiful and powerful masterpiece you have written here. |
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