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Voices Choose
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:24:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Who am i to judge you?
I dont know who are you?
Stop Questioning me!
You sound like a child
I do not
A child that is what you are. A worthless child
Stop pestering me
Is the child about to cry?
Stop it why must you torment me?
Your tears fall to show your weakness
Leave her be
No, the child must learn to be strong.
I wish to stay weak
Let her be leave her alone
No she must grow strong
You bring her tears and pain
let it me my choice............
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Re: Voices Choose
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:59:12 AM AEST
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| You have captured the physcotic essence...it was like watching an out of control argument...wasnt a picture I liked been in the middle to many times to count....very vivid and a little freaky...though masterfully written. |
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Re: Voices Choose
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:43:11 AM AEST
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Very vivid and captures the whole psychotic meaning! Loved this. It felt as if I was an outsider watching an argument.
excellent!
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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