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Oh Mom
Contributed by
Dandy
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:19:03 AM in AEST
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Oh Mom, please tell me, why did you have to die?
I need you now to comfort me, when I begin to cry,
Thirty years later, and Im your little boy thats lost,
Made such a huge mess of things to my terrible cost,
Oh Mom, it was awful, you leaving us and going,
Changed the way I behaved, without me even knowing,
So at the age of ten, all that was certain, disappeared,
Made me petrified of loss, and since Ive always feared,
Oh Mom, when I was told youd died; I disbelieved,
Kept thinking youd walk back in, so I never grieved,
The result; I hid all of my feelings, deep down inside,
Never showed my emotions, thought Id kept my pride,
Oh Mom, for thirty years now, Ive been so insecure,
Behaved in ways I shouldnt have because I was unsure,
So I erected a faade, designed to isolate and protect,
Protected my fragile ego, but my family it wrecked,
Oh Mom, when I think of you, lavender fills the air,
Takes me to warm summers when I didnt have a care,
But its so very different now, every single day I cry,
I really need a hug Mom, why did you have to die?
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Dandy
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Re: Oh Mom
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:20:13 AM AEST
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this is heartbreaking, so much emotions, brought a tear to my eye,
pixie xx |
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Re: Oh Mom
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:43:02 AM AEST
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this brought me to tears you really put forth emotions that reached out to touch all. Im so sorry for this great loss thats touched your heart so deeply. Im not anyone close to you but Ill send you a warm hug just the same.....
Hugssss and love
Michelle |
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Re: Oh Mom
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:23:48 AM AEST
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| I am really sorry for your loss, it was a great poem. |
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Re: Oh Mom
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:15:46 PM AEST
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Very powerful adn well explained poem..
detailing the emotions that somebody in that situation woukd go through...
No matter how bleak the situation may seem you should always carry on.
great write
keep up the good work
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Oh Mom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:12:59 PM AEST
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| this is very touching,it reminds me of my moms passing 2 yrs. ago.I can feel the void in your heart.Soo sorry for you loss. |
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Re: Oh Mom
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:30:39 AM AEST
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I am so sorry for your lost!!
great write ... keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing it... |
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