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Life's Punch Bag
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 12:35:16 PM in AEST
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I often feel like lifes punch bag,
This is when my problems mither & nag,
They just wont leave me alone,
In my heart is where they have called home.
The blows come thick & they come fast,
By punishing me life is really having a blast,
I try to block as life swings a punch,
But it hits me on the jaw with such a crunch.
I stagger back & fall into my corner,
Feeling a bit like little Jack Horner,
I wobble about on my feet,
Only for me & another blow to meet.
My nose is bust my face is a mess,
Increased ten fold have my levels of stress,
Life just laughs as the blows rain down,
Knocking me clean over & onto the ground.
I curl tightly up into a ball
This fight has been an easy one to call,
I am not much of an opponent for lifes strength,
As to destroy me it will go to any length.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-07 12:35:16]
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Re: Life's Punch Bag
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by johncenasangel on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 12:46:36 PM AEST
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Hun, that was really good. I have felt that way many of times, and unfortunetely I have held it in, until I could no longer hold it in anymore. Don't do that. It stinks! Anywho, great job on the poem and never stop writing!
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Re: Life's Punch Bag
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:56:38 PM AEST
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| You have alot of talent and a great way you vent your frustaions out.. |
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Re: Life's Punch Bag
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:11:57 PM AEST
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Thats why you gotta come out fighting! good poem pix.
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Re: Life's Punch Bag
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:12:52 PM AEST
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Many of us feel this way your words spoken true and from the heart. But don't give up on life for it really dose have a beautiful song. And you will win this battle and beat down all the things which may have brought you down. Great write.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Life's Punch Bag
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:07:12 PM AEST
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Great poem. Life is really a fight for sure; but you hung in there and didn't go down for t he count.
Way to go, fight the fight
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