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I have a man (that same man)
Contributed by
ina
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:32:50 PM in AEST
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ina
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Re: I have a man (that same man)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:45:47 PM AEST
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this man, an Everyman
(the same man)
at night
checks my vagina
to make certain
that I am dead
Yes - strong stuff - and you seem to thrive on it. Nice work |
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Re: I have a man (that same man)
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by Ina on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:32:55 AM AEST
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Haha, they deleted anothe rone of my poems. well, this one was sooo not as bad as the other one.
I know I am probably going to be banned for being too "sexual" (guys come on I am a MOD at another poetry site and this censoring problems has never occured there).
but here is the poem....
I have a man (that same man)
I have a man
in a room
in a bed
he ***** the staggering night
like paraplegic
I have a rubber band
around a man
who wants to eat
but he eats only when he is full
of wisdom
I have a man
in a shape of a brick
with cracked hands
who gives me holes
in my head
I have a man
whose belt in the dark
looks like a golden halo
and his angels are born
in the morning
this man, an Everyman
(the same man)
at night
checks my vagina
to make certain
that I am dead
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Re: I have a man (that same man)
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by reilt on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:29:29 PM AEST
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| a wonderful write. thank you for sharing* |
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