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Divorce From Reality, so Me
Contributed by
ina
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:34:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Your uncombed eyebrows make you look like God awaken from a nightmare where I lost all notions of how to live; your eyebrows like clouds creaking over a stained ocean go great with my messy eyelashes broken like corn stalks, husband
My hair smells like an airless dungeon and youre trapped under my chin, your hands smell metallic like fresh blood leaking from glass tubes; soap like sanity is false, never lasts
Even though I have been eating bread and Chinese again, my figure stays anorexic, your body has grown from the outside, your insides empty, like caskets
I notice these things husband, I wish you took me seriously at least this one time that I am so mad
Last night or last year I filled the ashtray with milk, cigarette midgets floated in bacteria eroding the process of rebirth I took a picture in case you didnt believe me, sad me
At night when u dont come home I draw your outline on the wall (white walls look like smashed skull pieces) and dance I dance! with you; our knees bumping
What if I told you I dont think I am Christ, I am only the Queen of the Altered States, and all the Indians carry me through the desert, I told you I am crazy, but you are too primitive
I see through the corn fields, into the city I see through our future into the eye of hurt I see through the wind into collective consciousness, I see through you into an eternal divorce from reality, so me.
Copyright ©
ina
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2004-12-07 14:34:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Divorce From Reality, so Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:44:30 PM AEST (User
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I ahve been looking forward to your return and missing your crazy beautiful poetry.
Thanks for writing - this one was good - especially here:
My hair smells like an
airless dungeon and
you’re trapped under
my chin, your hands smell
metallic like fresh
blood leaking from glass
tubes; soap like sanity
is false, never lasts
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Re: Divorce From Reality, so Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ina on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:36:29 AM AEST (User
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Thank you Mj. I wasnt going to post here anymore since I get deleted and censored up the wazoo. I was a bit bored today.
Again thank you for remembering me! |
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Re: Divorce From Reality, so Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by reilt on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:33:00 PM AEST (User
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i think this is amazing and envy your unique and brilliant way of expressing yourself. i have been a long-time fan of yours. please don't go away. i would miss your wonderful poems too too much |
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