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The way you use too
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:22:17 PM in AEST
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I miss how you use to smile
I loved the way you use to look at me
I miss the way you use to laugh at things I said
I loved how you use to whisper softly in my ear
I miss the way you use to look when I'd suprise you
I loved the way you use to dance under the stars
You left me for someone else
I still have our memories
I miss holding you tight
I loved the way you held me too
I miss kissing you each night
I loved the way you wanted more
I miss the way you walked
I loved to follow
I cry on my knees
The memories only haunt me now
I just can't move on
Maybe it's because of the way you use to do it all
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Re: The way you use too
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:45:59 PM AEST
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AWW,well hopefully i can haunt u with other unforgetable memories wink wink,LOL,great poem!
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Re: The way you use too
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:28:05 PM AEST
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well for the way this is written, i think it would be more powerful if it didnt repeat the same things for the beginning of the verse. and you broke out of pattern.
you can move on, you just dont want to as of yet. dont let the past hold you back from a future. you wont have anything to hold on to then... |
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