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Am I
Contributed by
ETrojan08
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:51:46 PM in AEST
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Am I worthless?
Am I unneeded?
Am I unwanted?
Am I predicable?
Am I ordinary?
Am I mental?
Am I pointless?
Am I stupid?
Am I tormented?
Am I an outsider?
Am I an insider?
Am I unique?
Am I a good person?
Am I depressed?
Am I needed?
Am I going the right path?
Am I taking my life into the hole?
Am I doing good?
Am I serving my purpose in this world?
Am I on the path to finding what I desire most?
Am I paying enough attention to that spec?
What am I?
Am I a monster?
A monster that cannot feel happiness?
A monster that cannot feel love?
Am I a man?
Am I a man who has a purpose?
Am I a man who has love?
A man who feels happiness?
A man who can see what lies beyond?
A man who knows his purpose?
Am I anything?
Am I just human?
A human who can feel pain?
Who can feel sorrow?
Who can be tormented?
Am I just here to be amusing to others?
To just be laughed at by all those who see me?
Am I meant to be loved?
Am I meant to feel happiness?
Am I meant for a future?
Am I?
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Re: Am I
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:59:32 PM AEST
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the answer to your questions.. you arent meant to be anything, you have to become something. dont spend the rest of your life wondering, or youll become the one that wonders where the time went and what you could have been. you are anything within your potential, dont waste it away wondering, when you could be living and find the answers that way.
as for your poem....the overuse of "am i" takes away what you are asking. people get tired of reading the same words over and over with little differences. verses that have more substance will bring your questions to life. you had good questions that everyone wonders, why not show why you think them?keep up the good work =] |
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Re: Am I
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:32:19 PM AEST
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I thought it was a great write these are the questions in life we all have had. AM I alive your words are heard. and felt GREAT WRITE.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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