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I'll miss you
Contributed by
stonedraider23
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:06:28 PM in AEST
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What I miss about you
I miss your smile
Long and wide like the biggest river
I miss your eyes
Deep and bright like the sky above
I miss the way I make you laugh
I miss how you helped me find myself
How you showed me love love when
I thought it was over
I miss you
I started too cry
I could see all the pain in your eyes
I wasn't there for you
Now I'll miss you more then ever
I remember catching you everytime you fell
And I miss that
I'm going to miss wipeing your tears away
Ilove you
I'm going to miss waking up next to you
I'll miss you
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2004-12-07 19:06:28]
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Re: I'll miss you
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:49:32 PM AEST
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| strong emotional write. nothing is wrong with missing someone or something as long as missing that someone or something makes you miss a future. |
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Re: I'll miss you
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:46:38 PM AEST
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wow, i agree with essentially 9,GREAT write keep up the great job
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Re: I'll miss you
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:22:51 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem. You sure miss this person. |
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