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If I Made My Feelings Clear
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:58:28 PM in AEST
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What would you do if I said I loved you?
If I made my feelings clear
And told you that you are my one and only
How would you feel if I said that I find you to be?
So much more than perfect in every way
And that someday I would like to marry you
So I could wake up next to you in the morning
And be in another dream
Would we change if I told you the truth?
Could you ever love me the same way?
Or in any way at all
Would you accept my heart if I were to give it to you unconditionally
And not ask your heart in return
But it is one thing I do hope for every day
It keeps me going
If we made what we felt clear
Would the distance between us tear us farther apart?
What do you really feel about me?
Is it possible that someday I could be loved?
I sometimes find it so hard to
But do you I wonder
I really do not need to know
I just needed to ask
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Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:24:57 AM AEST
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Very beautifull and touching.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:49:21 AM AEST
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This is very touching John,
I hung off every word.....
LOVE
Stace x |
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Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST
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I think every single person (I would like to think) has had an unrequited love or wanted so badly to ask but didn't know how.
I'm really impressed with this poem and your obvious talent.
Kie |
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Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:07:33 PM AEST
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| im torn on what to think of issues such as this. ask and get denied and never wonder. dont ask dont get denied and always wonder. wondering for me isnt as painful, but im different in a lot of cases, so this just might be another one. |
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