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Hater
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:14:54 AM in AEST
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I know its wrong to hate, so ill say I hate your ******* ways,
Go tell your **** im talking ****, i dont give a ***** what she says,
I hate what you did, and what you put me through,
I cant help it, i ******* hate you,
I was told to write my thoughts down,
I would tell you whats on my mind, if i ever saw you around,
Back in the days you ruled my life,
Im so ******* happy, i never became your wife,
The bruises fade, but the memories doesnt go away,
I want my revenge, and i want to make u pay,
Chrous:
I was told not to hate, but i cant help but hate you,
I hate all the **** that you put me through,
I hate you and i always will,
This is how i ******* feel
I hate you for all those wasted years,
I hate you for all those wasted tears,
How do i get back all those years that are gone?
How in the hell do i finally move on?
I remember you always thought i was out cheating,
What if i was, was you going to give me a beating?
I remember you put your hands on my neck and said u was going to kill me,
Im not going to be the one to die, if you **** with me, you will see,
Youre so sick in the head,
I think you are better off dead,
Chorus
You made my life a living hell,
You always made me feel like i was in jail,
Im gone, and youll have to find someone else to control,
Whoever she is, god help her soul,
Ill keep on forever hating you,
Ill never forget what you put me through
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Jenn2004
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Re: Hater
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:32:17 AM AEST
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Good venting. Hope u feel all better now.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Hater
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by girish on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:09:17 AM AEST
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i feel the pinch in your thoughts that has made you write this. read my poem on leading the domestic life. i`m still unmarried. but the readings helped me write that.
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Re: Hater
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by veenu on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:01:10 AM AEST
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the same way as u got cheated i too and she just keep on laughing,,,,,,,and i sit hopelessly in college at first she said i love and then .......................she got changed.......
i just want to kill her but i will not,,,,,,,,,,,,...........let her to play her part...............................may she undestand ...............................
i love that poem u have written,
wasted years and wasted tears
thats really a nice write
hope u come out of pain i cant come out of this poain cause i see her daily and when she talk to another boys.............
it just kill me
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Re: Hater
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by punkpoet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 11:40:41 AM AEST
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Good song....sorry to hear sad lyrics though but that wat life throws at you ey..:( everyone gets it.. some worse then other.. most of my poems are about this girl i am in love with who keeps breaking my heart....she got with the guy i was talking about in ( i hate you so much) sooo yeh ......
keep up the good writing
hope to hear lots more!!!
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Re: Hater
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:50:28 PM AEST
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well done, seriously so wicked. i liked the way you said "i know its wrong to hate, so ill say i hate your ****** ways" thats how i feel too. i dont wanna hate this guy but i cant stand what he did and he acted. i had to sit by and just let him mess with me and show off his new girl in front of my face...arggghhhhh JERK! i felt so much betta when i got my anger out. im posting my poem/song soon "what to say" please read it if u get the chance. i think u'll like it. great write again! keep it up
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Re: Hater
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:05:10 AM AEST
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| looks like moderator 9 was busy on this one. =] a lot of this poem is lost on me, because i wasnt even going to try and decipher what all the "***'s" meant. but what i did read was good because it showed your anger in a poetic form. you had some very nice rhymes. but hate eats you away, and it should be given and not kept. its better to give than receive. =] or my motto is, dont hate, obliterate. =] |
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