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Beat the Anger
Contributed by
CreaterofChaos
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Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
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Why do i have all this rage inside?
All i want is to be happy oh how i try.
All this repressed anger from my past
To much has happened to sudden and fast
I cry myself to sleep at night
Then wake up to the eternal fight
I'll make it through another day
Only trying to find a better way
I will eventually find a place in life
Because i refuse to pick up that knife
I may fall but i will keep going
Living day by day, I'll still be hoping
To find joy in my heart
where all this anger got it's start
I know I can make it though the test
As long as in the end I have tried my best
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:07:47 AM AEST
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| Well,glad you end your poem with a positive note :-) Good work pal! |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Sandy on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:20:58 AM AEST
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| Survivor instinct. I recognize it, you have to fight all the way and everything seems to come a price. But you know that you can never give up the fight!! as you would have given up to easily. Good expressions of feelings. |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:16:12 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful
inspirational write, that's all
we can do in life is try our very
best and give everything our all
I commend you for all you have
done not to pick up that knife
Thanks for sharing this one
it definately gives one alot to
think about. Great write
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 11:32:12 AM AEST
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| I hope there will be a time you can release this anger & be happy once more! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by plous on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 03:49:50 PM AEST
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| Yes, Don't let it destroy you. |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by SusieQ on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:18:22 PM AEST
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| Good writing, Creatorof Chaos! If you are actually feeling alot of anger and resentment of past events, try writing your thoughts and feelings about each hurtful event, as if you were writing a letter to the person involved or to yourself, if there are things you wish you'd done differently. No need to mail them, but you may find you are able to rid yourself of the negative feelings. This helped me in such matters. God bless you, SusieQ |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by syarmz on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:50:23 PM AEST
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| we are in the same ship, mate... |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 10:06:15 AM AEST
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| This is indeed a poem of inspiration. Good poem! |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 06:56:07 AM AEST
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| I have to say that i can relate to this poem so so so much. Great writing, you're an excellent poet. Don't let this get the best of you. :D |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:58:20 PM AEST
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Hmmm....
I don't know what's more pathetic. This poem or the fact that so many people seemed to like it. What the heck is wrong with you people?? Can't you tell that this poem sucks???? |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:26:21 PM AEST
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In reply to the last senseless comment. I must say you have to be blind to not enjoy this write. It was so honest. The line 'because I refuse to pick up that knife' I just love it shows the strength you have. A beautiful honest poem. Thnx for sharing life up your head. The lamest thing is ppl's cowardice when they slam other ppl's poems.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by vydana on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 07:42:52 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. I know how you feel :) |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by JamesHowlett on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 06:05:04 PM AEST
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This is a nicely written poem. Good job.
-James |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 10:51:21 AM AEST
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It really does annoy me that people are so cowardly as to slam other ppls poems, and not even admit up to who they are! It's just pathetic. Anyway creatorofchaos I know I have already commented lol but I just read it thru again and fell in love with it all over again. I can see why it is the most read poem, and now I can relate to it so much more than when I last commented ^_^
luv stacey |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 02:52:54 AM AEST
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| Eventhough I often write about giving in... I know in my heart I'll never do it because of the same things you talk about here. You were creative in the way you wrote this... "then wake up to the eternal fight" that is creative... don't mind jealous poeple who are too much a coward to even become a member before slamming peoples work. The statement Guest made showed severe lack of creativity. |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:51:57 PM AEST
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the fumb nuck that left the message with their iq tatooed all over well I want give them anymore attention.
This is very good writiing here as most of us can relate.
It takes courage to admit to the planet our innermost thoughts.
I know about anger in it's rarest forms as I had a medical condition that has been fixed by surjury and I take meds.
I do know how hard it is when someone pushes one 2 the max when all u've ever done 2 them is good. That's anger of the worst kind. Yo've got a great thing going for yourself as u r dealling with it and sharing!
God bless u,
emy
To me this poem is amongst our masterpeices, as it's deeper than most idiots can ever relate to. Let me make it clear that the idiot I'm referring to has no cooth.
Ya know when u've touched on nerves that are raw ''''''cause evil always sticks his head out-n-hollers first!
Very good, strong, emotional, reality writing.
LUV 2 ALL,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 05:39:36 AM AEST
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| This is amazing, i can relate so deeply to these words, it brought tears to my eyes, thank you for recognising my pain x |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Chadene_Gillespie on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 02:27:42 AM AEST
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| two thumbs up |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:07:56 PM AEST
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honesty is something that most people will never understand anyway what it truly means.
:-)~~~ |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 04:27:46 PM AEST
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I can strongly relate to this poem. I know how it feels to have ocean's full of anger and rage. In the long run it drains you. Anyway I really loved this poem. It feels good to know that I'm not the only one in this world who feels the same way. Sometimes I feel like my best isn't good enough. But it's a constant battle I go through. Thanx for sharing this lovely emotional and inspirational poem. Hope everything works out for ya.
Have a nice day :) |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:15:41 AM AEST
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I'm more in awe that this poem is the most-read poem from emotional poetry than anything else. I should think, by now, even the poet himself has another poem he thinks might be better than this ancient--albeit masterful--poem.
A nice way of saying it is this peom well-embodies the entirety of emotional poetry, making a dip in every aspect that matters. The other way of putting it is, save that tantalizingly good line "I refuse to pick up that knife," is that it's lacking in depth, and almost generic. This approach does allow almost anyone to connect (as I'm sure even the foolish coward did), but overuse borders boredom and redundancy; doesn't a poem sometime almost sound like 10 other poems? Distressingly so.
We seriously need to get another poem to replace this one--a lot of poets out there should find something new to appreciate.
I still like the line about the knife, though.
*grins*
There. This poem is forever stained by my irreperable commentary. It's so good I had to leave my stamp of greatness on it, and give it a commentary. Well, anyway...
*goes off to see of the author wrote anything more recent*
"Arrogance serves as a cowards cologne; It works to give substance to a man undergrown."
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:46:45 AM AEST
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| great poem, keep it up |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Justalady on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:10:21 PM AEST
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| Therapy is in expressing what one feels in written words. Not everyone can do that... and when one does, some do not understand the need. I've read where someone had the gall to say this is a terrible poem..... hopefully this individual has led and will continue to have a life with out ever experiencing anger. The positive ending shows some of the anger has left and yes.....anger destroys our heart and soul, as well as relationships with others. Do I enjoy this type of writing? Of course not, but I truly understand the need and truly hope life gets better for you. June |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by ammalu on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:02:55 AM AEST
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| theme is good, yes we've to fight against this rage inside-congrats. for the best piece. |
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Re: Beat the Anger
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:33:52 PM AEST
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| very well put. amazing and brilliant poem. written well. expressed outstandingly. and very true. |
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