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Just Us
Contributed by
Red_October
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:43:01 AM in AEST
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The man he became since we met -
He spoke and I never forget
his candy breath would choke out the words
until we would kiss;
drowned out the nouns & the verbs
and the sounds that we heard
were just each other.
It was never quite as nice
when I would speak up.
When I was brave enough
to talk about love,
I would mess everything up.
I couldn't shut up.
I couldn't enjoy
the essence of us.
And now I can.
I revel in every space he'll allow.
I weigh not the future,
only the here & the now.
I shine at the appropriate times.
I close my eyes and everything's fine.
No plans, no mess.
Spontaneous mixture and I never forget.
That's where my place is.
It isn't glamorous but it keeps me alive.
I close my eyes and everything's fine.
When he arrives
we'll drowned out the sounds
and it will just be us
not speaking up.
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Re: Just Us
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:44:22 AM AEST
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that was great, flow was good, great use of your feelings,
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Re: Just Us
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:53:34 AM AEST
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You have captured one of the nuances of the relationship with finesse.
BRAVO!
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