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GOOD MORNINGS
Contributed by
punkpoet
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:36:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Its 2.54 on this dark morning
My eyes are blurry and i feel like im falling
Why am i awake? Why arnt i in bed?
Youve been so unpleasent but mean things you said
If i could go back and change events in the past
I wouldnt hesitate id do it so fast!
But what i wonder, was it my mistake?
Or was it all your fault forgoodness sake??
I dont really know, I dont really care.
8 months back love was in the air...
Its all changed now, everythings broken.
Its been 4 months now since weve even spoken
Im in my room, at my computer desk
Wondering words just like in a test
My dog is snoring my internet dials
Memories from the past filled with your bright smiles
Now the time is 3:26 my feelings 4 you are so very mixed
Good charlotte is playing my brain is thinking
If this was the old me id most likley be drinking
Well im not gonna sit here and be sad over you
ill pretend its all good and realise its through
good morning
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Re: GOOD MORNINGS
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:38:20 AM AEST
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very good poem, I used to stay up right through the night. I am not a mroning person as in 7am sort of morning, thanks for sharing,
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Re: GOOD MORNINGS
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:49:16 AM AEST
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great write... enjoyed reading this...
hope to c more from u soon
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Re: GOOD MORNINGS
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:52:37 AM AEST
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Now this is much better.
I enjoyed reading this.
Nice flow,good rhymes.
4 out of 5.
I find i write best between the hours of 11pm and 5 am. |
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Re: GOOD MORNINGS
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:46:07 PM AEST
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wow, very good poem
Mixed emotions, very clearly written
I remember mornigns like those, I'm actually kind of happy that I went through them , it puts things in a complete different perspective
keep up the good work
*~Alicia~* |
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