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Market Street Revisited
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:56:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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granite stone heart barbed-wire feelings ivory tower messages broken glass ceilings
dancer girl mirage hot oasis dreams mid west castaway faded moon beams
ruled by saturn governed via mons cobble stoned faerie loosened cotton bonds
flash bulb delight ecstasy abounds revolving door capacity self control astounds
safety net unharnessed flying blind again absent of traces nine minus ten
fear overwroughted spirit trail's gone cold burden's enlightened score never been told
validate the purpose under basking glow sharing the wealth going the flow
vine covered roses earth rocked sky illusions create doubt angels never die
guilt ridden destiny innocence of charm gift beyond reason warning for alarm
fate's karma's chakra third eye's blind blossoming into nectar whomever may find
snow bound drifts mum's the word north branch rain no one heard
siren's come hither impish little girl she's missing something challenging second's twirl
market street revisited owning the day kissing spirit's entrance endeavoring to play
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-12-08 17:56:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Market Street Revisited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:32:40 PM AEST (User
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A very emotional & beautiful poem you have written..... Marvelous write!! |
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Re: Market Street Revisited
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:37:54 PM AEST (User
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I loved this so lovely and it flowed perfectly
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Re: Market Street Revisited
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:07:47 PM AEST (User
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This was really very good..I really liked how you put it all together.. |
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Re: Market Street Revisited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 07:19:10 AM AEST (User
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Why this lovely poem wasn't read more is beyond me. It is beautifully written and flows so well. |
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