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Just a dad
Contributed by
socialburnin
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:35:14 PM in AEST
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Some one asked me the other day
What do you want to be?
What do you want to do with your life?
Before old age strips away your dignity
And the answer that I gave
Surprised all who heard
I was the only one who wasent surprised
At my one true desire
I wanna be a dad
Just a dad
I wanna go to all the baseball games
And dance recitals
And band concerts
I wanna love my kids more then life itself
I want them to know
That there is always somewhere to go
And they can always come home
I want to give them everything my dad didnt
Like attenion and love
I want to know that my life wasnt totally wasted
Cause I helped make them into the fantastic people
I know they will all be
And I know theyll be parents too
So my life wont be wasted
Because I did something great
Ill give a little piece of my heart away
And get all of theres in return
Thats all I want to be
No more, no less
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Re: Just a dad
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by punkpoet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:43:01 PM AEST
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Hey man great poem!!!!!!! really liked it... i wanna be a dad aswell:D:D
im only 15
haha
keep up the great work man
"Ill give a little piece of my heart away"
great piece
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Re: Just a dad
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:51:59 PM AEST
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Very touching.
A masterpeice of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles, Dads,
emy |
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Re: Just a dad
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:47:48 PM AEST
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| amazing write. got me all teary eyed thinking about my dad. your poem seems to suggest that you will make a great one. |
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