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As You Are
Contributed by
summerwine
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:57:58 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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I took you as you came to me
and nothing more than that...
I wasn't trying to search your soul
For things I might find and couldn't control...
I loved you for what I saw in you
something so warm, pure and kind...
I'll not count your faults
and spew them back at you
In our moments of passionate frustration
that someday will be due...
I wouldn't want to change one thing about you
no way.... not for me
Because all of the things you are and will become
might never come to be...
And if ever you need me
know that I'll be there...
It doesn't matter how far away
And it doesn't matter where...
Copyright ©
summerwine
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2004-12-08 20:57:58]
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Re: As You Are
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: As You Are
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:45:11 PM AEST
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Wow, Summer!!! This is awesome...... very caring and so unselfish...
Loved this..
Jen
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Re: As You Are
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by Necromant on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:55:54 AM AEST
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| Aww you really cared for this person. great write :) |
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Re: As You Are
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by frozenintime on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:35:05 PM AEST
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| awesome..lots of feeling..i like it a lot |
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Re: As You Are
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:06:21 AM AEST
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Now that was lovely. There is true devotion at it's finest. Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
Corinna |
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