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Cruising
Contributed by
LustGlenny
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:31:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Just riding down the road
With my hands on the wheel
Listening to the good music
Knowing all eyes are on me
I took to my right, the passenger seat
And enjoy the beauty of the lady with me
I wave to the people I know
Not leaving a single person out
As I ride through the town
Even being acknowledged by strangers
Nothing in our minds but the road ahead
I continue to drive forward
Happy about my life here
And looking forward to the life somewhere else
Where ever the road takes me
Copyright ©
LustGlenny
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2004-12-08 22:31:45]
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Re: Cruising
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:32:09 PM AEST
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| this just seems like a ramble that a psychiastrist would want written. the ending verse sort of changes this, but i think it would be better to illustrate your message earlier than the very ending. |
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