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untitled
Contributed by
nogoodnamesleft
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Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:52:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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you play with my feelings like its no big deal you treat me like a plastic toy,not even real you have caused me to shed so many tears you soon became one of my worst fears you always made sure i knew you ruled over me even if it ment having to physically hurt me i knew everything you did to me was wrong but i thought i loved you so with it i went along i always said i was sorry even if i knew you had caused the pain but i thought if i were to forgive you, you would start to love me again it was like you had me under a spell and when someone actually showed me love, i couldn't tell so instead of getting away i sat in a corner, to afraid to even see daylight until i realized the only way to win my battles was to fight never will i have to deal with you again because i fought my battle and i won someday someone will come along playing the same game as you except they'll be playing tougher and harder and they'll beat you so while you are suffering and crying endlessly i'll be gone and living my life happily
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by lonithion on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:16:04 AM AEST (User
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Love the poem first of all. Very deep and full of pain and sorrow.
second of all, the title. As I was reading it, the only word in my mind was escape...
What ever you choose, its still a great poem.
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