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Star Gazing At The Beach
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:46:16 AM in AEST
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I was there again
Walking on the beach at night like we use to
Every time we wanted to go star gazing
We would walk bear foot on the sand
I remember how you use to love kicking sand at me
Just one more of our little games
I went to our old spot too I wanted to see if it was still there
The breeze felt really good as it passed right through me
So cold leaving shivers on my skin
Our old romantic getaway was still there I reminisced and sat alone
Thinking about the good times we had
Running and playing on the sand then after we tired
Of laying in the sand looking into each others eyes
Finding yet another way to escape it all
We would take the blankets out of your bag and sit in the gazebo
We had our binoculars on and we were
Looking up at the sky from under the gazebo
I did not need mine coz I had the most beautiful site right next to me
I still remember all the cold nights we would spend
Wrapped in a blanket keeping each other warm
Looking at the turtle hatch and move to the ocean just as the sun rose
We would kiss for hours at a time just the two of us
No really caring and forgetting about the world
Those were really great times
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Re: Star Gazing At The Beach
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:13:57 AM AEST
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I felt that ....It took me back to beaches in Oregon and a romance that lives ... forever ... in dreams. I wonder often where she is now
Great write !!
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Re: Star Gazing At The Beach
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:18:22 AM AEST
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Aaaahhh such a luving peacefull memory.
It reminds me of Daytona Beach, USA.
thanks 4 triggering my own memory's.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Star Gazing At The Beach
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:45:25 AM AEST
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This is so wonderful,
Reminded me of a day I spent wrapped up in a guys arms on a beach.
Its such a sweet write!
Love
Stace xx |
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Re: Star Gazing At The Beach
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:49:18 PM AEST
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very descriptive, a deep and touching write, great work,
pixie xx |
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Re: Star Gazing At The Beach
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:29:39 PM AEST
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| good times arent to be forgotten. |
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