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The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:26:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The sky is like me tonight
It feels like it wants to rain
But it cant really get the drops to fall
So it stays grey for as long as it can hold them in
There are so many clouds out tonight but it just wont rain
Only small drops are left to fall leaving their dew on leaves
From a sadness that wants to escape the eyes
I my self no how it feels to want to cry but still not wanting to
No matter how good it would do me if I did
I just feel like as if they would be a waste
The grass is dry and the flowers are thirsty but still it wont rain
I dont blame the sky for not wanting to
But still I do not want the flowers to wilt or the grass to turn brown and die
Leaving behind only a patch of dirt to turn to mud under the rain
Sometimes it rains and the streets flood I feel like that a lot these days
But like the sky I dont want to cry today
I really do not feel like I have a reason to but I feel as if I still should
I know that letting out what I have inside would do me good
But still I dont want to cry if I did my tears would burn this paper
Do not ask me how or why but that is just what it would do
The sky is so gray and as depressed as I am today
And today we are the same
We tire and go insane trying to fight the tears that come
But soon the sun will be out and the night time sky will be free
Free from all the clouds and ugliness but what about me
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:40:45 AM AEST
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this is different but its a good write...
LOve
stace x |
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:48:08 AM AEST
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| question.....sun or son......it could have some bearing on the meaning....so i thought i'd ask....oh, by the by.....put more power in your words.....i get the feeling your not feeling what your writing...I don't want to judge you...but if you don't cry....can't expect the reader too.....sorry if it offends you....I really hate giving my opinion i feel like a sod ^_^ |
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by venkat on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:28:11 AM AEST
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| very clear..its a good write..son!..ha it might be 'sun'..venkat |
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:57:24 AM AEST
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aww that was so sad and moving, instead of fighting the tears, let them flow it does us good to cry sometimes, a great release of tension,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:41:31 AM AEST
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| it ok to cry but if u don't that ok to until u are ready and u don't have to cry for us to cry and i think u put all your feelin into this poems that why writer write so u don't have cry anyway well that my opinion anyway |
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:26:09 PM AEST
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| no; know..son; sun.. you aren't taking time any more..and you aren't reading me any more either so there!!! bthhh!!! LOL |
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Re: The Sky Is Like Me Tonight
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:33:28 PM AEST
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| interesting write. i like the no rhyme scheme. |
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