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Frustration
Contributed by
Embracing_Darkness
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've always known I'm unhappy
But I've never known why
I always feel so helpless
So I just burst out and cry
Weakness inside me
Cold blood within my veins
Any sign of energy
Gets thrown up in flames
I can no longer hold these feelings
Can't bottle them up inside
With these tiny explosions
That are impossible to hide
I want to return to the world
Lay my troubles upon someone else
I'll live a second life
And watch them go through hell
Written in red ink
Like blood pouring from my hand
A tiny pinhole punctured in my skin
Lets itself expand
It opens up my mind
To see my thoughts stained
With images that burn like acid
Driving me insane..
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Embracing_Darkness
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2004-12-09 05:55:25]
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Re: Frustration
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:02:06 AM AEST
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expressive and very well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Frustration
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by Remi on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:32:11 AM AEST
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| I thought everything fits just fine and i have always wrtten poems well one line or one verse dosen't sem like it fit but it does so don't change anything about this writn ok |
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