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AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
Contributed by
Mangs
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:08:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look at me, Give me life...
breathe me in...then take out the knife...
Write me a song, sing it on stage,
Then tear the paper...set it ablaze..
Cover my mouth and muffle my scream
Sink your teeth and let my blood stream..
Thrust the knife, make it pure,
Then turn the blade, just to be sure..
Rip my heart out, Let me die,
Then stick a pipe and suck me dry..
Take my remains, dig a grave in hells keep,
Then strip me naked and shove me in deep..
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-12-09 08:08:20]
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Re: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:08:55 AM AEST
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a simple, dark and powerful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:35:23 AM AEST
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| Very strong feelings in so little words. A great write, well penned. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:36:31 AM AEST
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| I hear the screaming |
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Re: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:29:39 PM AEST
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omg just like totally awesome!
This is an amazing piece of dark poetry...
such much emotion in so few words......
Im just speechless hun, this is so well done!
Love always
Stace xx |
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Re: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
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by Chad on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:30:42 AM AEST
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| I defenitly feel that 1.. thanks and verry nicely wrighten |
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Re: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:42:49 AM AEST
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| lol - the title is great, and the poem itself owns up to it. Very good write! (^_^)b |
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