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Going to Die
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:08:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Through the beautiful skies, I use to pass over the clouds and soar,
But now I am chained down, and I can't do it anymore,
I use to be so free, I didn't have a care,
Now I'll never feel the wind again, blowing through my hair,
I've tried so many times, to up and fly away,
But these chains keep their hold and will never give way,
So now all I can do is sit here, wait for death to come,
My life seems so short, it seems like it has barely just begun,
Can anybody see me? Why don't you try and help?
Im begging and Im pleading, for these chains to melt,
I guess no one can hear me, they can't hear my mournful cry,
Im just another angel, an angel who's going to die.
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2004-12-09 18:08:04]
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Re: Going to Die
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by DesolantDreamer on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:57:21 PM AEST
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Very spiritual...this is a very good poem...good job!
-Tsubaki |
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Re: Going to Die
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:22:14 PM AEST
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| beautiful. I relate to it very much. Keep it up |
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Re: Going to Die
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:01:20 PM AEST
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| excellent write. reminds me of system of a down. |
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Re: Going to Die
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:07:06 PM AEST
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| good poem i feel that way but im no angel |
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