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The livery
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:32:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Pleasant daylight stretching me
my eyes
the tired sicknesses parading
over sand and sky
the sky is a bold
balloon burdened to be free
the mountains stirred
their endless breeze
The rivers of my mouth
the bed
of white and yellow stones
under blemished, black fields
The ashen flesh of my flesh
the unaligned bridge
of my spine
over the water of my breath
The moon and the stars
my brief
and sudden silence
my inability
The stars are beautiful
and hideous, believing me
the moon the glove
the livery; the child singing
silver singing surety and love.
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iodinelove
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2004-12-10 00:32:53]
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Re: The livery
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 01:34:18 AM AEST
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| Visually intense...though with some tender moments...so many thoughts floating trough your words...so beautifully written...I enjoyed reading this masterpiece. |
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Re: The livery
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:48:29 AM AEST
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"the child singing
silver singing surety and love."
Melodious, and with a lack of reads, too. |
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