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With You
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:30:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Bloody feathers float gracefully down
Forgotten angels fall down without a sound
Our wonderous moments forgotten forever
Shaking slightly I pull the trigger
I can't believe it took me so long to realize
That there was never truth in your eyes
A sharp shot and a dull thud
Lying here alone in a pool of my blood
Now I wonder will I ever be found?
Dying here, gasping on the ground
Even with you I was alone
Slowly you turned my core to stone
My beating heart, it beats no more
I'm lying here, twisted and maimed on the floor
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2004-12-10 03:30:12]
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Re: With You
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:16:11 AM AEST
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| wow, this is kinda haunting.. well done!! |
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Re: With You
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by pixie on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:13:23 AM AEST
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very well expressed, thank god the class was boring, as this amazing write came from it ...so very sad written well,
pixie xx |
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Re: With You
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by Stitch on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:22:34 AM AEST
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Ouch. I know the feeling.
Stitch |
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Re: With You
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:39:36 AM AEST
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| dunno bout wow but it was good keep em comin |
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