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A WALK ACROSS THE STREET
Contributed by
fenriquez
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I was walking and crossing the street
Next thing I know there's a mob around someone's feet
I try to get closer but they wont let me see
No one is budging as I push trying to catch a peek
Someone is injured and it looks like a guy
He going in convulsions it looks like the end
As people are helping they yell dial 9-1-1
I get even closer but still cant see his face
They do CPR till the medics arrive
Theyre shocking and pounding
At his already stopped heart
I stare at his shoes they look just like mine.
People start talking
It seems that the driver was pretty messed up
The poor kid didnt even see it coming
As the car made him flip
As I get even closer
They pronounce him dead at the scene.
I take a good glance
But it just cannot be
Its just so wrong that I cannot belief
That the person Im staring at
Happens to be me.
Copyright ©
fenriquez
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2004-12-10 10:44:36]
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Re: A WALK ACROSS THE STREET
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by MakeShift_2134 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:04:48 AM AEST
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Very good poem. I like the metaphors.
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Re: A WALK ACROSS THE STREET
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by amsy on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:17:43 AM AEST
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| cool poem. i liked the ending and well the whole thing. cool |
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