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Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me
Contributed by
Mangs
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:03:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Memories condescending....
Why do you bother with your pretending
Strip the mask off....kill the dream...
I gave you a chance to redeem
I put my trust in you....
All my hard work you did undo
I scream so loud, my ears go deaf...
And not a single rational thought is left.
Its an uphill stuggle...blood sweat and tears...
You have become everything that embodies my fears
It was easier to say hello than to say goodbye...
Why did you come back and make me wish to die?
Its you that i blame in this deal...
My wounds and torture i can no longer conceal
Once you fooled me - Shame on you.....twice you fooled me - Shame on me....
how did you manage to lead me so blindly
I gave you the knife and you obliged kindly...
Every word you uttered was a stab in my vulnerable heart
To meet was my wish but you always wanted to part..
Separate paths were taken, yet still you cause untold hurt.
I treated you with dignity yet you treated me like dirt...
So with all the hate in my heart I bid thee adieu..
Never will I trust you and never should you...
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-12-10 11:03:21]
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Re: Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me
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by pixie on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:04:20 AM AEST
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that was a brillaint dark collaboration by the pair of you
pixie xx |
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Re: Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me
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by little_genna on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:30:46 PM AEST
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Hey i really like the few changes you made to a couple of your lines.
They fit alot better......
love always
Stace xx |
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Re: Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 04:28:53 PM AEST
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| Great job. Both of your thoughts went well together. Nice collaboration. |
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