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Pretty Eyes - Shakespearean Sonnet
Contributed by
Ramfire
on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 06:23:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Trochaic Pentameter
Pretty eyes that show such deep affection
make the joy bells chime this day in my heart.
Why should I now be her great selection
most think she's a wondrous piece of fine art.
My head resonates bell loudly ringing
like to tintinnabulary paean.
Eyes that make the chimes to peal with singing
say this male thinks he's a blessed peon.
Lovely eyes that goad both feet to dancing,
they don't mind the lookers' gaze and smiles then.
Toes now take this happy swain to prancing -
I am high above the hoi polloi's ken.
Color me all lucky; Joan is my gift.
Life is great for me, Bill; hey, what a lift!
Copyright ©
Ramfire
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2002-07-19 18:23:23]
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Re: Pretty Eyes - Shakespearean Sonnet
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:52:15 PM AEST
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*reminisces* you sound like my old english teacher with your vocabulary, but through and through i'm reading some beautiful writing in here... ;0)
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