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The Reoccurring Dream
Contributed by
Willofree
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:44:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Tall and regal she presented
Attractive, but with hardened features
Demeanor suggested she resented
An alluring woman, but unhappy creature
Tough and stoic in the way she presented
A terrible reoccurring dream she complained
To relate the dream of a lighthouse she consented
In first person she offered the following refrain
I am a lighthouse she began
I am very tall and made of thick gray cold stone
I am located on desolate coastline land
I live there in this large lighthouse all alone
I have a thick locked wooden door
And small windows high up above
I can see out, but no one can see in any more
I am soft, warm and radiant inside, but there is no one to love
I have become a strong fortress
Well defended so no one can enter in
But the cost is being alone and courtless
No one knows what I am like within
She began to cry as she became lonely and sad
Now she understood her reocurring dream
And all the life that she never had
It was a time to begin life anew it seemed
She had to make a choice in her life
Her chosen path was not working
It was causing too much pain and strife
Around each corner her demons had been lurking
She finally reached the point where change was bearable
As the pain of her current life was so severe
To continue on as before would be terrible
It was no longer enough to live just for her career
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Willofree
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2004-12-10 15:44:23]
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Re: The Reoccurring Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:45:12 PM AEST
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Interesting write....well presented...
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Re: The Reoccurring Dream
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:06:45 PM AEST
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Sir, if you have written anything better ... I have yet to read it.
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Re: The Reoccurring Dream
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:09:27 AM AEST
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Wwwoooohhhh ther u go again jus reaching in grab the heart and make it smile in spite of it all.
Very powerfull writing!
masterpeice isn't strong enuff word for your writing.
smiles,
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