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A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT
Contributed by
scottishdancer
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:34:28 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Bite my tongue and swallow my pride
Bottle it up down inside
While crying behind my eyes
My mind wanders and flies
You beat my ignorance
And scar my innocents
You stab at me
And hear me plea
I am wounded and bleeding
But you think you are succeeding
Listen to my wisdom
And diagnose my symptom
Love you do not share
And hate that can't compare
To the pain I feel
While I cry and kneel
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2004-12-10 16:34:28]
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Re: A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT
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by karmen on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:42:57 PM AEST
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| Its a good write and i like the way that you use words to rhyme. I can also relate to the subject, my mother does the same to me and makes me feel the same except mentally. I hope things get better for you. |
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Re: A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:48:04 PM AEST
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| Great write, my mom does me the same way. |
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Re: A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:14:46 PM AEST
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| excellent write. powerful and emotional. reminds me of stainds, fade. but there will come a time where things are different, hopefully =] |
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