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Insanity's Knife
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:49:14 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Insanity has a knife
And through cut-up eyes
I see her
Beautiful, through all of my flaws
My faked sorrow, self-pity
For her imperfections
She was perfect
And for mine
I'm just a fake
Insanity's knife
Is my security, and
A hope for notice
For love, laughter
Love
Like positive and negative
Imperfect and perfect
Fake and beautiful
We were pulled
In an attraction
That has developed
Like a picture of the sunset
Gracing clouds with orange and pink hues
Sunset
Like light through rain drops
That shines under my thoughts
My sad, sorry, selfish thoughts
Reveries of dreams
Dreams of love
Love is not like anything
Especially a knife
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-12-10 19:49:14]
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Re: Insanity's Knife
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:04:12 PM AEST
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| good write. i guess what makes this better is the fact that you didnt try to rhyme this, because if you did you would have messed that up, or taken the poem in a new direction. the beginning reminds me of my poem, tears of rememberance, i think thats the one. because of the perfect concept. |
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Re: Insanity's Knife
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:34:48 PM AEST
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| awesome, i love it |
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Re: Insanity's Knife
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:50:55 AM AEST
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| damn dude this was amazing, especially those last two lines, you truly are one of the greatest poets in our century. |
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Re: Insanity's Knife
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:10:09 PM AEST
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It's good,
don't ask for bad comments.
Clones would make them.
You just keep writing
and strive for the best, Shemp.
--Moth |
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Re: Insanity's Knife
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:56:38 AM AEST
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This was good, made me think....
4/5
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