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Breathless
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:07:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To hold you close and whisper –
Of the love deep within my heart-
A love that reaches out to your soul-
This is what takes my breath away…
To kiss your lips with passion from within-
As we share a moment lost in pleasure-
Wrapped in the delight of time spent together-
This is what takes my breath away…
To feel the softness of your hand on my cheek-
Gently touching my face with trembling fingers-
And the smoothness of your skin upon my own-
This is what takes my breath away…
All that I see as you stand before me-
The vision of loveliness that you are-
Everything that you make me feel in my heart-
This is what takes my breath away…
With a whisper of love from my heart-
With a kiss of your lips so sweet-
With the soft trembling of your hand-
You are what takes my breath away…
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Re: Breathless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:22:04 PM AEST
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Joe,
This is absolutely beautiful. You have really captured
a moment here. Sweet, yet sensuous. Pure, yet wildly passionate.
Just lovely.
~Breezy |
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Re: Breathless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:27:12 PM AEST
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All I want in my Christmas stocking is a miracle. Something like you just posted. Can you put that in human form and have in my stocking on Christmas morning, please. I purchased a new large one this year, just in case.
Waiting patiently for Christmas,
Rita |
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Re: Breathless
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by Infinite_Sadness on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:16:41 AM AEST
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| now i miss somebody |
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