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I look At You And Fall Inlove
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:25:51 AM in AEST
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Every time I look at your face I just fall in love again and I feel risen
I feel so many things when I see you I cant explain all of them
I just want to wrap you in my arms and just hold you there for all eternity
Just looking at you there as if trapped in a gaze and loving you entirely
Makes me feel like I can never feel anything but bliss
Then when your lips meet mine in this amazing kiss
I feel just that, as if I were swimming in pools of bliss, the kind that angels miss
Then when we part your eyes meet mine like lips they take all my breath away
Your eyes are like a bird diving into the ocean of my soul setting all the wrong astray
Changing everything in me for the better shifting the path the current takes
You have given me everything I could ever as when I had nothing at stake
Nothing to live for nothing to lose always feeling tattered broken and used
You are my hopes my dreamer and I too dream of you because you are my muse
You are my world my life my every source of substance
I will always tell you how much I love you I will never miss a chance
I will show you my world and that everything beautiful in it is a piece of you
You are the light that shines unceasingly within me showing out brilliant and true
I want so hard to show you through my words what you meant to me
But I never feel like it is enough to truly describe your truest beauty
The way I can see your wings and honesty in what makes you whole
The way that I can find a means to strengthen my heart in your soul
I never want to hurt you or ever let you go
You are what I want most in life and I just wanted you to know
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Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove
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by tawnii on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:22:50 AM AEST
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NIce poem keep it up mate! well done. please can you look at my poems because i am a new member and i don't know if my poems are good thanx.
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Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:11:08 AM AEST
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| Nice poem =) I liked the imagery that came with it. |
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Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove
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by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:53:31 AM AEST
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you do really write some loving stuff, eachj one leaves me with a big smile on my face
pixie xx |
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Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:55:34 AM AEST
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| Sweet |
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Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:12:38 PM AEST
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| lovely as always. |
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