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dad
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:14:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i hate him so much
his voice makes me itch inside
my insides turn when he says he misses me
it makes me sick to hear him say he loves me
but when i see his picture
hidden in dark forgotton corners
i cry
my heart tears silently
and i bleed on
ive lost something inside
ive lost a part of my soul
my head spins
my insides spill out
the whole world oblivious i miss him
i carry on
i try and pretend it doesnt effect me
but inside im dying
i can feel myself going limp
i put up a barrier
love and hate cant pass
but somehow they get inside
and i break down
my heart moans
and my body morns
and i die...
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2004-12-11 10:14:36]
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Re: dad
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by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:16:32 AM AEST
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I thought that was gonna be a happy write *hugs*
This was so sad and emotinally written, can feel your pain and feelings in this write,
pixie xx |
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Re: dad
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by blackrose233 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:15:34 PM AEST
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| hi i love this poem it reminds me of how my father is the same way |
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