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Cleaning Out My Heart
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:59:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Trying to clean out my heart,
Underneath all the cobwebs it has been torn apart,
Scarred & cracked from pain past,
Hoping now it will leave me fast.
Ive got my little wooden handled broom,
To sweep away all of my gloom,
I want to make my heart squeaky clean,
As for too many years has life been quite mean.
Heart is starting to regain its beat,
You are helping me back onto my feet,
In your hand you hold a feather duster,
Helping me to find all the strength I can muster.
I feel like I am ready to start living,
As now finally heartache is being forgiving,
It has allowed me to find love & here you have stayed,
I know we will be together until our dying day.
On the days when I feel a little depressed,
Inside your love I want to be dressed,
Wrapped in your arms so very tight,
Now I feel happier our futures looking bright.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-11 12:59:04]
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:11:38 PM AEST
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Wow thats was just beautiful pix, its just Wow.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:41:17 PM AEST
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aww beautiful write pixie awesome JOB!!
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:06:45 PM AEST
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Keep writing, Pixie.
You know I'll read it.
--The ..Moth |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:27:19 PM AEST
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beautiful my friend.....you never let me down ;o)
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:53:17 PM AEST
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Awesome write, Pixie.... Glad all is well with you..
Hugs and love
Jenni |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by Jenn2004 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:22:51 PM AEST
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| Good write Pixie it was nice!!! |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by killingmehslowly on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:00:48 PM AEST
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| i love it. This is so beautifully written. |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by OnAngelswings on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:19:59 PM AEST
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| very good writting...you have a special way of saying things...I enjoyed this very much...we can all relate at some point in our lives with this one...Shari |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:14:23 AM AEST
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Well, I'm also always looking forward to your next poem, you have the potential to become a very good poet. This poem of yours, for example, suggests that there is still life even after the love has gone, that there is still hope even after the storm of despair, that there is still room for a smile on your face even after countless tears have fallen down from your eyes. It's a very good poem and you just inspired me to write one. Thanks! Hope you never stop writing!
-Butch |
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Re: Cleaning Out My Heart
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:20:20 AM AEST
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Awh pixie that was beautiful. It really was writen in such a gifted way. How well you pieced your story together. The rythem & flow ran together beautifully.
Your talent shines through as bright as the sun. What a work of art. You should be proud, your work is well enjoyed!
Corinna |
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