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Never Thought
Contributed by
Artemis03
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:15:19 PM in AEST
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I never thought that I'd feel this way
about some guy I met the other day.
Never did it come to me that a dance
would lead to us, him and me, a chance.
As we held hands, slow danced, while the music flowed
I thought to myself, do I wanna let go?
But knowing I had to, he drew me closer
not letting lose til the song was over.
I never thought, it could happen to me
A sudden rush of mixed feelings, that made me happy.
Never did I ask for it, and never did it seem
to be a false illusion, a dream.
I felt a connetion between him and I
Dreaming about it all that night.
And, I never thought i'd awake
with a smile liek this one on my face.
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Artemis03
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2004-12-11 19:15:19]
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Re: Never Thought
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:32:53 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Never Thought
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by athena on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:37:14 PM AEST
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ahhhhhhhhhhh!! just bueatiful...frome one godess to another...i love it...i love your use of emotions.
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Re: Never Thought
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:22:59 AM AEST
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Awh lovely sweet romantic write.
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