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Faint reminders on my wrist
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Faint reminders on my wrist,
Bloody razors that I have missed,
Sharp metallic mirror imbedded in my fist,
Untouched lips I wish youd kiss.
Tough needles make me blind,
Hatred seems to be my sign,
Would you give me a kiss or a frown?
I hope I will never let you down.
See through arms that dont exist,
Your name at the top of my list,
Promises I wish youd kept,
I hope Im not one of your regrets.
My black feathers burnt and undone,
Coming too close to the sun,
Bones acts as my pitiful wings,
A small necklace containing my dreams.
Grey icy bleeding eyes,
Half empty heart willing to die,
Reaper or memories free in my night,
A rusted scythe holding me tight.
Fingertips of a burning flame,
Acting like im only a mere game,
A locked heart without a key,
Breaking through my tyranny.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-12-11 19:41:18]
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Re: Faint reminders on my wrist
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by Apolla on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem |
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Re: Faint reminders on my wrist
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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| amazing write. =] |
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Re: Faint reminders on my wrist
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:27:58 AM AEST
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| wow, awesome, well done!!! |
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