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The Games People Play
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:28:58 AM in AEST
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My heart is a jigsaw, many pieces,
Hope and pain and secret wishes
Start with the borders and work to the centre
Only then will I let you enter.
My character is a puzzle box,
With many sides and intricate locks
Search long and hard for every key
Then Ill reveal the inner me.
My life is a riddle, no clear answers,
So many choices, so few chances
Find a way through this morass
Until then you cannot pass.
My love is a maze, twists and turnings,
Joyful passions and many yearnings
Choose carefully the path you wish to enter
You may get lost within its centre.
Jigsaws, puzzles, riddles and mazes,
Too much perhaps, for surface gazers
But for the patient soul who finds the means
A promise of more enticing games.
Copyright ©
spike
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2004-12-12 04:28:58]
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Re: The Games People Play
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:51:06 AM AEST
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OMG this is beyond brilliant, that was one of the best poems ever. Im so in love with this piece.
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Re: The Games People Play
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:54:56 AM AEST
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Very creative write. Luv the puzzles.
A masterpeice 'cause we never stop learning if we pay attention.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:03:59 AM AEST
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wow that was amazing, just brilliant,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by holy on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:34:00 AM AEST
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| This is exactly enticement that loves, the game of the love, seek the stimulus of the love. We love, because love it mysterious difficult to resolve, love we, it is ourselves' glamour of the reason. |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by Ada on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:12:00 AM AEST
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| Brilliant... It was beautifully written. Can you comment on my poems too? I'd love to hear comments from a good poet such as you... |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:44:57 AM AEST
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| an amazing poem... one of the best ive ever seen... truly amazing... |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by kammie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:16:08 AM AEST
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| you've written it from the heart you know what people need to find in you and your helping them do it its the most amazing poem i'v ever read !! i think im in love with it (lmao) so i gess we should all say thanks for a wonderful poem spike xxxxxxxxxx luv kammie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:45:24 AM AEST
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Truly a GREAT WRITE.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:12:16 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, spike. A most exemplary poem.
I am not surprised. You never cease to amaze.
You have such a way of capturing a single feeling and
expressing it in exceptional form. I truly enjoyed this one.
~Breezy |
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Re: The Games People Play
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:16:25 AM AEST
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Dang, Spike, there ain't no better way to "learn" the rules than to lay yours all out at the outset with such sweetness, assertive, gentle warnin's 'n' mysterious promise in your very skillfully structured - no masterfully structured talent-ladened usage of words. Let's see, oh well - SUPERB again. I'll always be in AWE. Anyone found all the keys?
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