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I could love you one day
Contributed by
necromant
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:57:24 PM in AEST
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How can you describe something with all your honesty?
Verbalize feelings and emotions that are a still a mystery?
Lies are the easy way out, Yes, I love you or at least I want to.
Would you prefer that reply or simply want to hear whats true?
I do want to get to know you but Im terribly afraid,
Love is simply something my heart always tries to evade,
Things are even more difficult with the age difference,
Thats why I am so mistrustful so filled with prudence
I did get some weird thoughts of moonlight, sand and oceans,
But the clouds always arrive and the atmosphere always darkens,
Youd probably better be off without me, but it isnt easy to let you go,
Its selfish and cruel to tell you dont go, but I cant understand this sorrow.
Sorry for causing you so much troubles, for hurting you with my mistrust,
Im a conservative and never did try to raise already long settled dust,
I should throw caution into the wind and forget what happened in the past,
Am tempted to do just that, but what guarantees I have that the love would last?
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Re: I could love you one day
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by Summerwine on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:18:46 PM AEST
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| great write...I totally understand being afraid to love, but love is a journey on the road of life and we must follow where it leads, and put aside the fears, and just enjoy the trip... Yvonne |
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Re: I could love you one day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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wow! that was something great write.
Johnny.
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Re: I could love you one day
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 02:06:30 AM AEST
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Very good writing and so wise.
A masterpeice as we all get scared sometimes.
huggs,
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