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obsessions
Contributed by
athena
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:58:15 PM in AEST
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Obsessions, my obsessions,
They mean nothing to you because they are not your own.
When i get into something,
Perhaps a guy, a play,
I throw myself in so deep i dont come up for air.
It becomes my lifes passion.
Then it happens,
The guy doesnt like me anymore,
The play ends,
And I am forced up to the surface to take a breath of reality.
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athena
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2004-12-12 17:58:15]
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Re: obsessions
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by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:03:13 PM AEST
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| I love your poem gurl. It was so true and deep and just beautiful! |
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Re: obsessions
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by Artemis03 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:11:41 PM AEST
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| Aah.. the loveliness..yet so true. lol Hope to see more fo ya stuff gurl. |
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Re: obsessions
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:03:12 PM AEST
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| Such an emotional write Athena. Welcome To YPDC. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: obsessions
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by little_genna on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:28:13 AM AEST
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This is a really truthful poem,
It sounds as if it has alot of pain in the words...
Take care hunny
Love
Gen xx |
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